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Old July 14, 2009, 02:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Player name: Lunamaria
English language proficiency:
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Character number:
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Faction: Earth Alliance,
Requested faction membership: Yes

General

Full name: Hailey Rain Washington
Nickname: C-132, Rain
Age: Appears to be 20
Gender: Female
Race: Third Generation Extended,
Occupation: Soldier
Birthplace: Berlin
Citizenship: Eurasia
Personality:

Rain doesn’t get along well with anyone bluntly, she doesn’t like people at all. Because of this dislike she rarely acknowledges other peoples existence let alone feelings or desires. The product of this is a woman that doesn’t speak much other than when she’s in battle. And truly doesn’t care about how people feel or what they think. She doesn’t trust or rely on anyone else to help her and can’t be relied on to help others without orders. She doesn’t have a reason to fight other than she’s told to and she enjoys it, she doesn’t care about anyone else reasons. She will only voice her opinion when asked by a directly superior officer.

To a person watching her Rain seems to be the silent brooding type, not one to interact much. When she does it’s often curt and rude, it doesn’t matter what other people think of her and she isn’t trying to impress anyone. She is just there to fight and that’s all they want her to do.

Appearance

Height: 5’8”
Weight: 57 kg
Hair Colour and Style: Blackish Grey, shoulder length that may be tied back on occasion.
Eye Colour: Blue
Identifying Marks: Scar along her back from top to bottom an inch to the right of her spine. Part of her right collarbone is missing at the top from a bullet wound.
Skin Tone: Pale,
Build: Slender tall woman with a toned body but low muscle mass made up for with high density.
Clothing: Very plain, no effort involved clothing. Uniform is often left open, she doesn’t enjoy being constrained and tends towards baggy loose clothing.
Handiness: Ambidextrous, Right hand favoured,

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Personal History:


Felicitas was born in 63CE to a couple in Berlin, the birth of her and her twin brother was an accident. From a very young age she was abused by her father, beaten, belittled, tortured and raped. He took out his own insecurities and problems on his two young children, his drunken rages would leave both of them cowering for days. Its pretty safe to say she hated her life, everyday living in fear. Her mother not much help, just as scarred of her husband as her children were. That man brought so much terror into the little girl’s eyes, she would quake at even his name. She wouldn’t cry though, she had already learnt the lesson that crying only brought more punishment.

She was lucky that when she was five what her mother had had enough but that was also one of the worst points. Karl killed Kelly and shot both of his children before shooting himself. From that point for a little while Felicitas was very luck girl. Shot through the chest her lung punctured the sound drew police into the building. It was tough but somehow both she and her brother survived. From there they were placed into an orphanage where she spent only a month. Both were then taken into a different style of home, a military one.

From the age of five and three months she was taken into one of the Earth Alliances top secret programs and then for most of her life never saw the light of day again. A trained killer, top of the range in performance enhancing drugs, physical and mental training and a brutal regime. Life fire training, fights to the death, Felicitas climbed to the top of that pile of children with their blood and bones as her hand grips. As she got better training stepped up as did strictness. She lost contact with her brother a long time ago, but she knew he was alive before, now she wasn’t so sure. Time didn’t mean much, just day after day, week after week she trained for all the time she was awake.

She was one of the perfect specimens and was a prime candidate for cloning. So an updated life was created from her, a copy with her DNA but improved for a better solider. The person that was created of this DNA was called Hailey Rain Washington, a girl identical to her clone parent. She had rapid growth till late puberty, increased by drugs and the genetic changes. Now she looks like she is in her early twenties, though she is in reality much younger than that.

She was put through the same training as her original had done and as expected was superior. Her reactions, her muscle density, intelligence along with a photographic memory, she is a vision of a perfect soldier. She has done admirably in all her training but hasn’t taken well to the social aspects. Partly from her originals past abilities and upbringing isolated she doesn’t like people at all. Her usual reaction is to ignore them, people for the most part were completely useless and she didn’t have time for them. It also came quite apparent she didn’t deal well with authority, though she would follow orders as programmed there was a lot of attitude. She doesn’t tend to work well in large operations with other groups due to her disrespect of other pilots. It is due her qualities as a pilot and stability that she remains in the program.

She is finally being introduced to full action in the near future, she has piloted a Windam on several occasions but not in combat. It is believed that she is adequate for the duties assigned to her.

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Old July 29, 2009, 11:51 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Other than some random typos here and there, seems like an interesting profile to me. I'll wait for more opinions before giving this a go.
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Everything checks in with the 3rd Extendeds. This is good to go. Any body else want to add in before approval
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Old August 4, 2009, 06:12 AM   #4 (permalink)
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All the things discussed on IRC seem to be fixed, so okay from me.
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Well, the only thing I really need to say is that for the first half of her history I was really confused because the person being talked about was Felicitas. In order to make things clearer for other readers, I suggest listing Felicitas as her 'parent' like how you'd normally list the names of the character's father/mother.

Also, I'm wondering if she has some of Felicitas' memories. The only example we really have are Rau and Rey, and it seemed in the series that Rey might've had some of Rau's memories (not sure about Rau having Mwu's father's memories). It's kinda important to consider seeing as so much more of Felicitas' past was explained.

Speaking of which, is Felicitas alive? Considering the drugs, I wonder if she could've survived so long after the war with the fall of LOGOS and all (the primary backers of the Extended program).
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She was listed as parent but I was asked to change it,

For the last two,

Its a mystery I guess you'll just have to wait for the RP to unfold,
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Maybe 'Doner' then? Or perhaps add a sentence in the beginning like:

"Rain's story actually begins with the origins of a woman named Felicitas..."
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