Allyson Raynor

**the General** · July 20, 2009, 02:13 PM

Player
Player name: the General
Character number: ?
Faction: ORB

General

Full name: Allyson Raynor
Nickname: Myla Forire (Stage Name)
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Race: Natural
Occupation: Singer/ FREE Forces Pilot
Birthplace: Iqaluit, Canada.
Citizenship: Orb

Personality:

The two words to best describe the Allyson’s personality are Jovial and smart.

She’s always the first person to accept overseas missions and loves to hang around town and bask in all the different regions she travels to. She absolutely enjoys travelling and most of all learning new things. She is often seen perusing local food stalls and indulging in any country’s delicacies.

She absolutely enjoys reading books on the beach and basking under the sunlight. A lot of her free time is spent singing, doing missions, or working on training her skills.

When it comes down to missions her attitude changes from the jovial and smart side,to being more relaxed and sharp. She’ll try as best as she can to never hit the cockpits of her enemies, but this always seems to fail. After defeating an enemy she’ll laugh at them or celebrate with some genuine Canadian foods.

She is an absolutely beautiful singer and loves to express this by joining karaoke contests when she can. She really dislikes tight and revealing clothing.

Personal Quote: “The world is my book and its countries are the pages in which I am to explore!”

Appearance

Height: 5 feet 5 inches
Weight: 110 pounds
Hair Colour and Style: Mid back length, Naturally flowing black hair. Her bangs are parted above her left eye and brushed to the right.

During combat she ties her hair into two long and pulled back pony tails.
Identifying Marks: Her wonderful singing voice. It is described as Mezzo soprano, the middle type. Where it is not too soprano and not too alto. Her voice is very strong.

Skin Tone: Caucasian.
Build: Slim and slender but not feminine. Her chest is small.
Clothing:
Leisure: Allyson absolutely loves long skirts and dresses. Her favorite colours to wear are white, pale blue and black. She wears a set of gold trimmed glasses. She wears a pinafores from time to time and tops it with a black tie and blue dress shirt.

Military: When in uniform she wears the standard female orb uniform and always keeps it well maintained.

Concerts:When she is performing, she often wears a dark blue cheongsam with gold print which bares her shoulders.

Handiness: Ambidextrous, Her entire body has adapted to an advanced form of it. This allows her to do two different things at one with both side of her body and still perform as though two hands were being used.

Background

Mother: Marigold Raynor (Atlantic Federation, MS Pilot)
Father: Archibald Raynor (Genetics Specialist, O.M.N.I. Enforcers)

Siblings: Cherise Raynor
Wife/Girlfriend: N/A

Personal History:
Allyson was born in the cold, harsh city of Iqaluit Canada. Her childhood consisted of very few things and she often found herself at home singing the latest songs and reading books. She absolutely loved spending time with her family and friends. A famous pink haired pop singer was her favorite.

At the age of 6, the second War hit many places, including her hometown. It came under attack just as the war was about to end and her family had no choice but to move from Iqaluit to a small town in Alaska, where her father found a new job. At that point, her mother was a seasoned veteran of the war and held the rank of First Lieutenant

At the age of 9 her parents entered her in a local singing contest where she won first place by signing “O’ Canada”. Many people were amazed at how wonderful her voice sounded. After that she was featured in two commercials promoting a soft drink for a major company. Although he role was minor this still added to her fame. Overjoyed, Allyson's family threw a small party for her. They also took her on vacation to the town of Nashville, Tennessee so she could experience a concert for the first time..

By the age of 16 Allyson alongside her singing always found herself doing multiple tasks with each hand. Alongside her singing she was always doing complicated task with both her left and right hands. Eventually her body began to adapt to this style and an advanced form of ambidextrous was formed. Originally her right hand was the dominate one.

Up until the age of 19 Allyson was like any other regular girl and put into a regular schools system. Her grades in Gym, Art, Drama, Acting and Music classes were always the highest with grade averages of 92%.

On her 19th birthday she moved out of her house and decided to explore the world one place at a time. Without any fear she hopped onto a plane and went to Kusanagi City. She spent a year in Kusanagi learning how to survive on her own. She moved into a large apartment in the central part of the city.

After a year of living in the Kusanagi and always looking for record deals and sponsors for her singing career she had no luck. So she decided on her second goal, Allyson decided to travel the world. Since her mother had connections with the O.M.N.I, she always used to tell her about the different and wondrous places around the world that the military took her to. After she left for ORB her Mother and Father were no longer allowed to talk to her.

Her parents decided is was best that a member of the Earth Alliance did not associate with a member of ORB. This was decided because event her mother had experienced in the past. As well as the pain ORB was put through. This was also a issue of job security as a high ranking officer such as herself couldn’t be seen talking with a member of Orb.

Allyson went to the FREE Forces recruitment office that day and signed up. From that day on her life would never be the same and all she thought she would become would never happen. For the first year of recruitment she was positioned at the base for basic training on things like hand to hand combat, self defense and a vast array of other things. But where she excelled most in was mobile suit handling skills.

Perhaps the most useful skills Allyson possesses is her faster reaction time and her ability to perform actions faster than most others. She also has fine motor skills which aid in this but can also add major flaws to her battle tactics. The things she was always complimented on while training in exercises was how well she could take in her surrounding and remember them. She was always aware of what was around her and adapted self to suit the conditions. She can hold her own against any coordinator in battle

Occasionally she would sing a song or two to her fellow soldiers to keep their spirits up. Many people at her base were mesmerized by it, resulting in an explosion of popularity for Allyson as she suddenly found herself being asked out often, to the extent that there were even one of two members of the same sex who did so as well. A lot of the time her commanding officers would get to her about her unscheduled personal “concerts” she would perform for her fellow soldiers.

Over the course of the next 3 years Allyson’s on base performances and her multiple visits to the local bars and clubs to sing shows would eventually spark the interest of two small record companies. The first was the Warmen Music Group and the Second was the Mor Gen Erations Music. Both would watch over her and eventually come to a conclusion. The larger of two record labels the Mor Gen Eration Music would sign her onto a small 3 year contract where her music, voice and talent would be assessed.

The contract would allow her to stay in the military but at times where she was allowed to leave and go off base to come for a few sessions and assessments where she would be studied. Eventually this could lead to a point where she could release a single or two out into the public. For now she stays in the military and continues to serve her nations with pride and honour. She still loves to flirt and sing to her fellow soldiers.

**Janus** · July 20, 2009, 02:59 PM

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Faction: ORB

That would be incorrect if she's a mercenary.

**Lunamaria** · July 20, 2009, 05:23 PM

I will just point out the two largest flaws as is not finish but really, Word does catch some of those problems,

Now why does does anyone want her to join ST?

She had shown she can sing, that isn't a quality that ST is looking for. As she hasn't shown any other skills that doesn't make sense.

She joins ST then the OMNI, that doesn't work. If its meant to be the other way around why does she join them. She doesn't show any other interest in it, why would she?

**the General** · July 20, 2009, 06:20 PM

@ORB: I thought that meant the faction I was currently in.

@The other thing: She joined OMNI or the Atlantic Federation so she could get experiance piloting and M.S.

And I am currently looking for a better reason for her to join it.

Any suggestions as to why Serpent Tail would want her?

**kct** · July 20, 2009, 06:32 PM

...Don't you realize the problem is that everything in the last two paragraphs are too confusing? You're making it like she accepted Serpent Tail's offer, and THEN joined the Atlantic Federation for no reason whatsoever.

In addition to that, having singing talent doesn't mean that Serpent Tail are interested in her. They want people that would be willing to do the dirty work, not pose around like a diva all day long. That part about joining Serpent Tail? Sounds more like she was scouted by someone into joining a record company, NOT a mercenary organization.

**Kino** · July 20, 2009, 06:50 PM

General....

Did you have anyone in mind when you made Allyson? Is she BASED off of someone? It seems most of your characters are.

**the General** · July 21, 2009, 05:12 AM

Shes completely based from scratch. And I am completely overhauling the history. well some parts of if

**the General** · July 21, 2009, 11:26 AM

Updated history

Haro didn't merge it

oh well

**Kino** · July 21, 2009, 12:00 PM

....

General. She can't be born in two places. Which is it? Whitehorse? Or in Baffin Island? Whitehorse isn't even in Nunavut, it's in the Yukon. Get your facts straight before you post.

Also, you say that she isn't feminine and can pass for a boy....I'm sorry, but that image says otherwise. I don't think she has a snowball's chance in hell of looking like a boy. I suggest finding another picture to represent her, or not using one at all and simply describe her.

Her singing makes no sense. Here she is, an amazing and beautiful singer that soldiers "can't get enough of" to the point where even the opposite sex asks her on dates....and she can't get a record deal? That's an excuse, and it doesn't make sense to me.

You have multiple grammar and spelling issues, as well as punctuation issues. Do you even check the profile with grammar/spelling checks before posting them?

I'll read over it again later when I have more patience.

**the General** · July 21, 2009, 12:08 PM

It's getting a complete Overhaul.