Enko

**Enko** · June 3, 2009, 12:49 AM

Player
Player name: Enko
English language proficiency: Native Speaker
Character number: 1
Faction: Earth Alliance
Requested faction membership: Yes

General

Full name: Enko Regadashi
Nickname: Enko
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Natural
Occupation: Pilot
Birthplace: JOSH-A
Birthdate: February 8th CE 67
Citizenship: Atlantic Federation
Personality: Enko is usually dives always into his work. He loves piloting. He is very smart but, he knows when to have a good time. He is also very passive as he normally doesn't fire the first shot. But, when in a battle he does give it everything hes got. So he can end the fight quickly and decisively. He always is trying the best that he can at anything. He wants to be a high ranking officer pilot of a Gundam because of his parents so he set his goals for it. He's dedicated to anything and everything he does or will do. And never gives up. He is also very kindhearted.

Appearance

Height: 5’9’’ 175 cm
Weight: 160 lbs. 72.5 kgs
Hair Colour and Style: Enko’s hair color is a dyed dark blue. His hair is worn down, he has short bangs and hair length is right above his shoulders by a inch.
Eye Colour: Enko eyes are a light grey with no marks or anything in them. They seem almost cartoon like.
Identifying Marks: none.
Skin Tone: Enko’s skin is a light tan. Almost in the perfect range not too dark not to light.
Build: Enko is very skinny yet has slightly muscular arms.
Clothing: Enko is always seen in the Blue standard Earth Alliance uniform but, on special occasion he will wear the white uniform otherwise from that he has khaki cargo pants with a blank white tee shirt and a blank white long sleeve shirt.
Handiness: Right Handed

Background

Mother: Hikari Regadashi (Mobile Suit Designer, Deceased)
Father: Sasaki Regadashi (Mobile Suit Designer, Deceased)
Siblings: none
Spouse: Tori Regadashi aka Tori Hauro
Personal History:
As the child of two well liked and respected Earth Alliance Gundam designers Enko was born into the military. And when he was little around one and two he around a girl coordinator Tori Haruo the daughter of militray friends of his parents. To whom we all knew he was supposed to marry. He was on earth most of the time his parents usually went on business trips frequently. But, when he was six his parents died in the "Break the World" incident. He was at a military boarding school in JOSH-A at the time when he got the news.

He basically lived in the military. He went to military academy. Got good grades and dreamed of piloting a Gundam. When his parents died the Hauro's, his parents best friends and family to his future wife, took him in. As a child living with the Hauro's he was a crazy and wild kid who didn't appreciate rules. So to him he thought it would look good to dye his hair blue and ever since then he dyes his hair a dark blue. Even though he was smart in class he acted out about a lot of things just because he didn't agree with them. As a child he was very violent but, protective to Tori at all times. Many times he referred to her as his sister. He never had many friends but, he had a few close friends.
Because of the deaths of his parents he hated war and the Military. The deaths of the parents effected him a lot. By him going through his violent outrages especially against the military. When he was young he didn't even consider going into the Military. The only reason why he was even still in the Military Academy was because his parents put him there so to honor them he stayed. He took his schooling very seriously for that reason and gave everything he did there his best. He hated the entire idea Zaft and Plant also coordinators he hated. He looked at the world as unfair and mean. Therefore around others he was seen as strange or an outcast besides Tori and a few others whose ideals at the time were the same.

When Enko became a teen approximately seven years after his parents death he realized how he felt about Tori. So he asked her out on a date. Even though it had occurred to her of having feelings for him she never knew how he felt about her. So they were in love in a peaceful time. As both were equally loving to each other. He even started obeying rules and became less wild. Now realizing the fact that the Earth Alliance had nothing to do with his parents deaths and deiced to fallow his parents footsteps by joining the military. But, he wanted to pilot a Gundam or a MS. One of the main things he always dreamed about a found very interesting and straining. His old friends ended up hating him for his newly found ideals and ideas. But, out of these ideas and ideals he found new friends. Through careful studying he realized that his hate towards Zaft as well as Plant were wrong. Through out his teen years he became an even greater student then before and military volunteer. He helped at any time he could with Tori right next to him. For five years he did this. Doing anything he could to to help the Alliance. Also he made lots of new friends in the military.

When five years past Enko turned 18 and knew what he wanted to do. He finished the Military Academy perfectly and wanted to serve in the military if only to eventually pilot a Gundam. But, before he even enlisted he proposed to Tori. But, before he even enlisted he proposed to Tori. At first she rejected it. Then two days later she came and threw herself on top of him kissing him and said "I want to marry you." Enko who was surprised by this kissed back. And they were engaged and more in love then they were, which to most people thought impossible. Two months later Tori and Enko got married. Enko enlisted in the Earth Alliance Military right after their honeymoon.

its finally done I hope it gets approved

**EvenAngels** · June 3, 2009, 02:46 AM

Thought I'd read through this too see how you're done. (Not that my opinion has any sway since I'm not staff

)

Hope you don't mind... I like the story between Enko and Tori, it makes the character feel more real. ^_^ However, you only really touched on the after effects of his parents' deaths briefly. You say he acted out and was violent, but wouldn't it have more of an effect than that? Did it affect his view of the world?

Also... Wow they had a short engagement. xD

All in all, I think it's a good profile (hopefully the Faction Leaders will as well ^_^) but I think you concentrate a lot on the relationship between Enko and Tori, and not on the other aspects of his life.

Does that make any sense? I'm half asleep whilst writing this.

Anyway, hope you don't me saying those things. Just wanna help you get it approved. ^_^

**Enko** · June 3, 2009, 04:10 AM

lol thanks I'll make sure to expand on that even though I thought I added it in there i apparently didn't so thats new in my profile but, Tori's whole character was inspired by my girlfriend in another Fanfiction we did of Neon Genesis Evangalion lol but, name an profile was different

**gundamoutlaw** · June 3, 2009, 04:49 AM

I have to agree with EA, you might want to talk about some of the other aspects of his life and expand on the after effects of his parent's deaths. Also you probably should go through and check your grammar and such, I'm not usually all that good at it but I can see several places where you'll need to merge sentences and do some rewording.

(EX. He was born into the Military both parents were great Gundam designers. They worked for the Earth Alliance military happily. And they had good friends.) vs. (As the child of two well liked and respected Earth Alliance Gundam designers Enko was born as a military brat.) or something like that.

**Enko** · June 3, 2009, 04:51 AM

Ok thanks I got it

**Lunamaria** · June 3, 2009, 05:01 AM

A few little things though I like the character,

I haven't got my glasses on but leaving a line between paragraphs makes them much easier to read at least to me.

A few small things like

"Even though it had occurred to her her feelings for him she never knew how he felt about her."

You could stand to lose a few hers and there are one or two places where the fullstops run into the next word.

I liked the idea and the history,

Also note that only natural hair and eye colours can be used, I think the eyes are fine but the hair will have to be dyed blue.

**Enko** · June 3, 2009, 05:07 AM

Thanks for the help I completely forgot to say he dyed it oops heh thanks for the grammar when I was writing it that didn't even occur to me at the time. The history took a while to pull together but, in the end I think it worked out

**Sealedsoul** · July 2, 2009, 08:32 PM

Well constructed profile, However,

Main issue(s);
Coordinators will not be accepted into the Earth Alliance military.
Earth Alliance have/will not employ coordinators to develop Gundams.

Minor issue(s);
How you survived the incident that killed your parents.
Military Academies did not train pilots to pilot Gundams, Extendeds were/are developed for Gundams.
For citizenship it should be either; Alantic Federation, Eurasian Federation or Republic of East Asia

Suggestions;
Explain why he needs to dye his hair.

Those are the issues I've read, I haven't paid attention to grammar and spelling, so check those.

And of such, This Profile will not be approved at this point.

Please make the adequate changes and continue the approval process.
Thank you for choosing Earth Alliance, we hope you will be able to join our force soon.

**Enko** · July 4, 2009, 02:47 AM

I think and hope thats all the changes if you see more point them out

**Lunamaria** · July 4, 2009, 03:06 AM

Occupation would be pilot rather than Gundam operator

Other than that at a glance it seems good,